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You left us
You closed the door
You blocked out the light
You weren't with us anymore

For so long it was just us three
Then mom grew ill
She let go of my my hand
Sickness won over will

We cried that night
There was sorrow and then some
The funeral was the next day
You didn't even come

We trained so hard
To once more see her face
You are not welcome here
You're a disgrace

Your intentions may have been pure
But you actions are riddled with guilt
You drove a knife through our family
Pushing down hard on the hilt

I guess I don't hate you
But my fury is real
And nothing can break
This heart of steel

You helped us though
You were all that we had
So once, just this once
I will call you dad
edward really does love his father
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pikawoo221B Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This was amazing! It was so accurate as to describe Edward's feelings towards his dad. Wonderful job with this :)
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manga51 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
thank you! :)
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agatstone Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013
Amazing poem. It does really well reflect how Ed feels towards Hohenheim
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manga51 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
i'm glad you think that. thank you!
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JustDoItMarshall Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
NO! NO MORE FEELS, OKAY? I was tearing up at the end of brotherhood.
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fangirl242 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
and I love this post!!!
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diamond-flutist Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
This is amazing!
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alicin Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ohh you captured it so beautifully!
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fangirl242 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
ain't it an amazing poem? I love it!!!!
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AnimeLover0962 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Student Artist
this is so good watching fullmetal alchemist now love ed XD
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